I felt his hand on my shoulder before it was actually there, and trembled all the harder when he spoke.
''Excuse me miss but are you okay"
It was so strong now, the desire for him. That it radiated in waves throughout my body, up towards the point of physical contact. There I could feel his fingers, his hands, so defined and warm. I was afraid to turn around and see his eyes again. To imagine what it would be like laying beneath him, our eyes locked as he moved over me.------

An exert from a story I am writing I tried to tone it down some and I think lost some of the meaning along the way, but I didn't want to offend anyone, it is a dark fantasy type story and I suppose a little erotic, but it is about a succubus so what could one expect, theres also going to be lots of action with guns and kick-butt demon hunters, so we'll have to see. As to why I posted, I suppose I just wanted some feed back.