Topic: Sewn as was...
creativesoul's photo
Fri 11/30/07 04:32 PM
A hearts open pages... for all to read
Leads to the exposure... of what lies beneath

Though there is nothing wrong... with honesty laid out
Your thoughts then belong... as your feelings they shout

To those who could choose... provocation at best
With all strings they use... for attempts at unrest

Efforts meant to cause strife... they smile deep inside
Within them lies the knife... that they cannot hide

It's edge made of words... carefully they are placed
Around what is meant to disturb... as they like being chased

But these eyes have seen it... recorded in times of past
And believe me I mean it... the disturbance won't last

You see my good friend... who is as not seems
As the deflection begins... you steal your own dreams

Said in so many ways... times of old days of new
Sewn as was fruit today... it is he who will chew





MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 11/30/07 04:43 PM
flowerforyou

Unsane's photo
Fri 11/30/07 06:33 PM
insightful. some original ideas. very good job.