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You Touched my Soul
Felt My Heart Life for me so complete Nights of loneliness fade away Darkness lifted fears erased Light entered breath I take Dreams of one Now for two Eternity with you Unconditional Love Given to me,,,, Body, Mind & Soul Touched you see My Heart & Soul From this Man given to me Love exists…. Lives within From my Soul Blessed with his Touched My Body, Soul & Mind |
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Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it |
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you should go check out allpoetry.com
post some of your work. it's a big site and it has a lot of authors, who all love to read newcomers material. let me know what you think about it if you try it out... |
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Denise that was beautiful....I think I have some competition here....I don't think I could have written that well at all.
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BOO! Guess who? Had to say Hi!
Lovin ya lots! |
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an excellent thought for an outstanding love
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very nice mom
i am happy for you so nice so kind so sweet are you... |
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There is nothing like seeing someone with a soul as loving as yours to find the love of there life. Love ya ((((Buttercup)))
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oooooo, very nice {{{{{Mom}}}}}}...beautiful words, meaning so much!!
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I am smiling .... all the way through I am smiling ... so so happy for you!
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(((Dennis)))
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Hugs & Kiss's,, Sending lotsa love to you all
((( Ken )))) safe travels,,, miss you |
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That made me sigh out loud...so nice. I am envious because all I can do is come up with ideas for poems, thank God I have Robert who can put them into poems.. I enjoyed this poem so much, thank you.
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I am soooooooooo happy for you. Maybe next time we come to L.A. we will see you and your friend.
G |
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You Touched my Soul Felt My Heart Life for me so complete Nights of loneliness fade away Darkness lifted fears erased Light entered breath I take Dreams of one Now for two Eternity with you Unconditional Love Given to me,,,, Body, Mind & Soul Touched you see My Heart & Soul From this Man given to me Love exists…. Lives within From my Soul Blessed with his Touched My Body, Soul & Mind okay i dont compliment many on their writing but mom that was very good and oh so touching i really liked it very much. good job cant wait to read your next one. ace |
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That had a nice warm feeling to it. I liked it, good job.
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Wow Mom! Very beautiful indeed. I am so happy that you have found the love to make your life complete.
Sandy and Wolfie |
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I love you all so very much,,,, My love to you
Hugs & Kiss's (((( Craig ))))) Next time for sure,, I was with John over the Holiday,,, I hope you and Kim had an incredible Thanksgiving. |
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