Topic: Touched
LAMom's photo
Thu 11/29/07 10:37 PM
You Touched my Soul
Felt My Heart
Life for me so complete

Nights of loneliness fade away
Darkness lifted fears erased
Light entered breath I take

Dreams of one
Now for two
Eternity with you

Unconditional Love
Given to me,,,,
Body, Mind & Soul

Touched you see
My Heart & Soul
From this Man given to me

Love exists…. Lives within
From my Soul Blessed with his

Touched
My Body, Soul & Mind
:heart: :heart: :heart:






TiraLys's photo
Thu 11/29/07 10:49 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou happy flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou
Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading it happy

dankedrem's photo
Thu 11/29/07 11:05 PM
you should go check out allpoetry.com

post some of your work. it's a big site and it has a lot of authors, who all love to read newcomers material.

let me know what you think about it if you try it out...

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 11/29/07 11:13 PM
Denise that was beautiful....I think I have some competition here....I don't think I could have written that well at all.

s1owhand's photo
Fri 11/30/07 12:44 AM
bigsmile flowerforyou bigsmile

no_psychos_please's photo
Fri 11/30/07 06:14 AM
BOO! Guess who? Had to say Hi! laugh bigsmile

Lovin ya lots! flowerforyou :heart: smooched :heart: flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Fri 11/30/07 06:48 AM
an excellent thought for an outstanding loveflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Fri 11/30/07 06:58 AM
very nice mom

i am happy for you
so nice so kind so sweet are you...

flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Fri 11/30/07 07:32 AM
There is nothing like seeing someone with a soul as loving as yours to find the love of there life. Love ya ((((Buttercup)))bigsmile :heart: bigsmile

eileena9's photo
Fri 11/30/07 03:09 PM
oooooo, very nice {{{{{Mom}}}}}}...beautiful words, meaning so much!!

ArtGurl's photo
Fri 11/30/07 04:43 PM
I am smiling .... all the way through I am smiling ... so so happy for you! flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 11/30/07 04:46 PM
(((Dennis)))
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Fri 11/30/07 11:41 PM
Hugs & Kiss's,, Sending lotsa love to you all


((( Ken )))) safe travels,,, miss you flowerforyou smooched

songstress1's photo
Sat 12/01/07 08:12 AM
That made me sigh out loud...so nice. I am envious because all I can do is come up with ideas for poems, thank God I have Robert who can put them into poems.. I enjoyed this poem so much, thank you.

Gryphyn's photo
Sat 12/01/07 01:50 PM
I am soooooooooo happy for you. Maybe next time we come to L.A. we will see you and your friend.

flowerforyou :heart: bigsmile

G

no photo
Sat 12/01/07 01:55 PM

You Touched my Soul
Felt My Heart
Life for me so complete

Nights of loneliness fade away
Darkness lifted fears erased
Light entered breath I take

Dreams of one
Now for two
Eternity with you

Unconditional Love
Given to me,,,,
Body, Mind & Soul

Touched you see
My Heart & Soul
From this Man given to me

Love exists…. Lives within
From my Soul Blessed with his

Touched
My Body, Soul & Mind
:heart: :heart: :heart:







okay i dont compliment many on their writing but mom that was very good and oh so touching i really liked it very much. good job cant wait to read your next one.
ace

CI1180's photo
Sat 12/01/07 06:37 PM
That had a nice warm feeling to it. I liked it, good job.

sandylou2456's photo
Sat 12/01/07 06:41 PM
Wow Mom! Very beautiful indeed. I am so happy that you have found the love to make your life complete. :heart: flowerforyou :heart:
Sandy and Wolfie

LAMom's photo
Sat 12/01/07 09:36 PM
I love you all so very much,,,, My love to you
Hugs & Kiss's


(((( Craig ))))) Next time for sure,, I was with John over the Holiday,,, I hope you and Kim had an incredible Thanksgiving.

flowerforyou :heart: