As I sit alone
in my dark cold abliss
staring out my window
wondering what i might miss
is this step worth it
is this what i need
can i not survive
for anyone but me
im so alone though
in my thoughts and in my dreams
im the only one wandering
what life really means
so i think ill pick it up now
that new gun my dad bought
usually under lock and key
but i guess he forgot
i could have done it before
but i was too afraid
i guess i needed more time
to get my choices made
so i waited for a while
but my feelings are just the same
....all from the diary of that dead girl
oh, what's her name?




btw this is not about me....my style of writting is to put myself in the position of someone else......in the mind of someone else and try to capture the way they feel....i try to do a good job.

you're young...and i'm sure you're not alone...maybe just a little lonely...get up and get out...pls just be glad you're alive...there is sooooooo much you have to see and do in your life...you have a purpose...hell i'm 44 yrs old and i have no idea what my purpose is but one day it'll come to me...i've lost 2 children and when someone chooses to end their life it f*ing pisses me off if it's just a frustrated write...then i applaud you...i love the dark side...i miss chubby cherub...if you need to talk e-mail me...brenda...thanks for the rant i feel better now.....and you will too

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does noone like this poem?

man its not that....
keep writing, do not be discouraged.

Life is a choice we make,, it's survival,, it's faith, It's hope,,, Life is and can be so incredible,,, Ups & downs along the way make us stronger,,, One must learn to love the who they are the who they are in the soul,,, peace and calm will set in and ease the pain of being alone ,,,, yet one is not really alone at all,,,

R E M "everybody hurts"

When the day is long and the night, the night is yours alone,
when you're sure you've had enough of this life, well hang on.
Don't let yourself go, everybody cries and everybody hurts sometimes.

Sometimes everything is wrong. Now it's time to sing along.
When your day is night alone, (hold on, hold on)
if you feel like letting go, (hold on)
when you think you've had too much of this life, well hang on.

Everybody hurts. Take comfort in your friends.
Everybody hurts. Don't throw your hand. Oh, no. Don't throw your hand.
If you feel like you're alone, no, no, no, you are not alone

If you're on your own in this life, the days and nights are long,
when you think you've had too much of this life to hang on.

Well, everybody hurts sometimes,
everybody cries. And everybody hurts sometimes.
And everybody hurts sometimes. So, hold on, hold on.
Hold on, hold on. Hold on, hold on. Hold on, hold on. (repeat & fade)
(Everybody hurts. You are not alone.)

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y does hardly anyone comment to my topics

It depends on the timing as to when the poems are read.
Sometimes there are'nt that many people reading them at the time.

Very good write-
that girl sounds lost...

ty

That was a real good write doesn't...I do the same thing sometimes...so don't get discouraged....Keep bringing it to the top at certain times so people can see it...there are times on here that are dead so you need to find out when the best time to post will be.

ty wolf