As the music plays
she is transported back in time
When she was young
in love with love
as much as with him
in love with the idea
of love
as much as the
real emotion
they had danced
the night away
his blond hair
had felt like silk
his shoulders
so broad
his blue eyes
shining
for the first time
she had felt pretty
for the first time
she had felt wanted
Time would change
those feelings
they would go
on different roads
but she would
remember that night
always in her memory
she will hold that night
close to her heart

your very talented

Very good. HAve ahappy tday :)




People stop trying to delete threads please

ah...and no more delition....

I loved this,brings back memories for me. Made me smile to remember them. Thanks.

Beautifully written...thanks

I love it, it flows into itself so well I just get lost in it. Truly captivating.

I was deleted did not even know LOL

That was very good Mary...I would not know why someone would want to delete that....it was very well written and heart felt.


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People who delete such nice things as this, should just stick to the forums they are more comfortable with. Poetry is expressed beautifully and with the heart. Keep posting Mary.

very nice Mary

Very good write memories are great to have.

Nice Mary...