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I have never wrote a poem before but I wanted to put something special on the first page of the scrap book I made my mom for her 60th birthday could I please get some in put on what I wrote thank you...
You were there to hold my hand when I was sad walking in the sand You were always there to wipe the tears away and in your heart I know i have a place to stay I know I can always count on you to be there to cheer and to chase away my fear Yours was the first face I got to see you made me the person I am from all the love you gave me |
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your mother will shed tears when she reads her poem
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Thank you
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she will love it, great poem
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Ohhhhhhhhh she will love it,,,
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It's beautiful! Your Mom is lucky to be so appreciated. I think she would love it. You spoke from the heart. Be prepared receive her tears of joy and love. Very kind of you.
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Thank you everyone I just didnt know if it was corny cause I made it rhymn
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