Topic: poem for my mom
singleaunt's photo
Sat 11/17/07 08:37 PM
I have never wrote a poem before but I wanted to put something special on the first page of the scrap book I made my mom for her 60th birthday could I please get some in put on what I wrote thank you...



You were there to hold my hand
when I was sad walking in the sand

You were always there to wipe the tears away
and in your heart I know i have a place to stay

I know I can always count on you to be there to cheer
and to chase away my fear

Yours was the first face I got to see
you made me the person I am from all the love you gave me

KalamazooGuy87's photo
Sat 11/17/07 08:38 PM
your mother will shed tears when she reads her poem

singleaunt's photo
Sat 11/17/07 08:38 PM
Thank you

Pete_170's photo
Sat 11/17/07 08:39 PM
she will love it, great poem

LAMom's photo
Sat 11/17/07 08:39 PM
Ohhhhhhhhh she will love it,,, flowerforyou

no photo
Sat 11/17/07 08:41 PM
It's beautiful! Your Mom is lucky to be so appreciated. I think she would love it. You spoke from the heart. Be prepared receive her tears of joy and love. Very kind of you.

singleaunt's photo
Sat 11/17/07 08:43 PM
Thank you everyone I just didnt know if it was corny cause I made it rhymn