Topic: The Broom (not really about a broom)
Mad_Gouki's photo
Tue 11/13/07 09:35 AM
This is a poem I wrote:
the broom sits in the corner
waiting for the day that it may strike
the broom sits in the corner
it stands watch throughout the night

always being pushed around
it's feet are always on the ground
when it stops doing its job they throw it away
A new broom arrives to fill the space

but lately the broom has been lonely
dirt to clean but no one to hold me
cobwebs and dust fill the house of decay
the broom waits quietly for another day

Differentkindofwench's photo
Tue 11/13/07 09:37 AM
Maybe not about a broom, but I was still swept away by it. Nicely done!

FallinAngel82's photo
Tue 11/13/07 09:38 AM
never fun to feel like a used broom that no one wants anymore

nicely worded

Muddysneakers77's photo
Tue 11/13/07 09:45 AM
replace that broom with a Swiffer!

Oh wait, this is like one of those poem things where the broom is a representation of the author........nvm :P