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Topic: For You
joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Wed 09/14/16 03:23 PM
I hold out the palms of my hands Cupped and holding all I have to give you Take it, if you feel Be gentle please Like a lost puppy, free to a good home Fragile and scared If you want it Take it for all eternity Never let go Hold on with all you have It will protect you Love you, need you Be assured, there's no one else in line I'd give my heart to you, anytime

Madcatlady01 Joined Sun 08/07/16 Posts: 338	Thu 09/15/16 01:42 PM
lovely

tmh1063 Joined Fri 07/01/16 Posts: 1965	Thu 09/15/16 08:06 PM
That's beautiful, Joe.

SitkaRains Joined Thu 10/09/08 Posts: 17228	Thu 09/15/16 08:18 PM
Wow great job Joe.. One of your best

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Thu 09/15/16 10:56 PM
I love it, Joe I hope she reads it

Two Joined Thu 06/02/16 Posts: 13917	Thu 09/15/16 10:58 PM
Joe, you are bringing out the squishy soft part of me(emotions). Very nice! I enjoyed reading it and appreciate your talent. Please keep it up! When will you have a book published of your writings???

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Sat 09/17/16 05:01 AM
Good stuff Joe.

UrMissingLib Joined Sun 03/13/16 Posts: 377	Sat 09/17/16 11:08 AM
Great expression! Love inspiring piece, simple but captivating. You left me wanting more lol. Well done, Joe! You stole a part of me....

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Sat 09/17/16 12:20 PM
Beautifully written, as always.

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