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The night so cold yet i'm on fire
So tight you hold me, kiss me lover Taste the fire of my burning lips Feel the flame in my fingertips My passion burns aflame for you My want you cannot tame for you Nails gently raking on your skin As my blue eyes drink you in Want to taste you every inch Take my time leave none to waste My lover leave me with your taste With just a touch i shiver and quake Your hands upon me oh how i ache Your lips so soft upon my skin Your lips so..mmm..again and again Your touch it burns a glorious flame writhing and wanting..... I'm calling you name Take me now lover Again and again |
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Great job, but now I have a heated desire for hot passionate love... NOW !!!
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I feel the warmth even through the cold night
I held her as she had never been held I came close to her lips before a kiss, a pause, a last look I picked up her hand and held it close to me The intense feelings abound and yet confuse My shirt ripped down the middle Marks on my skin Her ice blue eyes could see through me They brought me in further to where I had not been before Her kiss ran wild, making my breath faint Slow agony yet fullfillment, more I lift her head to place a kiss Her hand upon my hand, upon her chest She shuttered and leaned back as she felt her body intense I grabbed her hair and pulled her back Let her know she was a part of my fate Destiny burns burns on her lips A kiss so intense it burns like flame She screams my name She is Mine, I am Hers Again, Again |
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thanks for reading
and your poem is nice also uwanna may i ask why you wrote kinda a response poem to mine? |
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Well what do you do when your inspired? I couldn't just keep that all in and sleep with it. That would keep me up all night.
btw: Can you get the neosporin cause I've got to take care of these gentle marks you left from the last rhythms you wrote. John |
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very sensual in a nice and touchy wording indeed, good job sugar
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Very, very nice SugarJen.
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