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James… I might come off like an ***… But I want to be honest and I'm going to shoot straight. You took the time and risk to post here, I'll risk you being angry with my feedback.
First, lose the profile pic, take one where you're smiling, lose the hat and sunglasses… It's too Douche Bag.… You can use the picture of you and your buddy on the balcony, but crop out your buddy… Or at least crop out the Raiders hat… JK… Not really… The Raiders are barely cool in California… I'm not sure what South Carolina looks like regarding Raiders fandom, I'm guessing the populace of Raiders fans are outliers. Change your username. Be creative. Don't be dumb. Add more pictures, smile, have pictures of you having fun. There's got to be more you're interested in being on man on man aggression, and fitness. If there really is nothing else than leave it, don't be fake. For your bio section… Grammar matters, and for a guy that enjoys alpha male hand-to-hand combat, you seem really passive based on your self description. The whole point of the bio is to pique some interest and hopefully build curiosity, in my opinion. Use a thesaurus. I hope that's helpful, good luck. |
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James… I might come off like an ***… But I want to be honest and I'm going to shoot straight. You took the time and risk to post here, I'll risk you being angry with my feedback. First, lose the profile pic, take one where you're smiling, lose the hat and sunglasses… It's too Douche Bag.… You can use the picture of you and your buddy on the balcony, but crop out your buddy… Or at least crop out the Raiders hat… JK… Not really… The Raiders are barely cool in California… I'm not sure what South Carolina looks like regarding Raiders fandom, I'm guessing the populace of Raiders fans are outliers. Change your username. Be creative. Don't be dumb. Add more pictures, smile, have pictures of you having fun. There's got to be more you're interested in being on man on man aggression, and fitness. If there really is nothing else than leave it, don't be fake. For your bio section… Grammar matters, and for a guy that enjoys alpha male hand-to-hand combat, you seem really passive based on your self description. The whole point of the bio is to pique some interest and hopefully build curiosity, in my opinion. Use a thesaurus. I hope that's helpful, good luck. ditto Welcome to Mingle2 and best of luck in what you are searching for. |
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The “bro dude” look in your main photo isn’t doing much for you.
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