Topic: Alone with you...
greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 11/07/06 09:24 AM
Ever since I can remember-
I waited for the day,
When I could look into your eyes
Filled with love and say;

This is the very moment that-
I've waited for so long,
But when that moment finally came-
something was so wrong.

We held hands and said the vows,
Promised to be true-
But in my heart I want to leave,
Because I'm alone with you.

The bills get paid,
We go to work-
Do things married people do;
But the passion is always missing-
When I'm alone with you.

For once I'd like you to let go,
To touch, to feel, to taste....
All that trapped inside my heart,
Is slowly going to waste.

Everyday is so mondane-
There's nothing I'd like more,
Than to feel your arms around me;
When you walk thru that door.

But you'll peck me on the cheek,
asking "how was your day?"
It was good and how about your?
Thats what we always say.

And while I lay in bed tonight.
In the silence I can break thru-
I'll wonder how long this can last,
When I'm so alone with you.


Tressia
copyright 2/19/04

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Tue 11/07/06 09:30 AM
THAT WAS VERRY GOOD HAVE A GOOD DAY

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Tue 11/07/06 09:34 AM
GREENEYEDLADY, THAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST HERE THAT I HAVE READ.



FROM START, TO HEART, TO TART, TO PART, ALL ROLLED TOGETHER
TO MAKE A NEW START. LOVELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

greeneyedlady42's photo
Tue 11/07/06 09:37 AM
Thank you for the kind words...
I have been writing since I was very young.
Its my outlet. And truly from the heart.

You have no idea how much your kind words mean to me.

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Tue 11/07/06 09:44 AM
YOUR WELCOME, AND I WALKED THROUGH MY OWN MARRAGE (PAST) AS I READ YOU
WORDS. IT WAS REALLY GOOD? I USE TO HAVE ALOT ON PAPER BUT THROUGH LIFE
ONE OF THE FIRST THINGS YOU DO TO RE-START YOUR LIFE IS TO GET RID OF
EVERYTHING THAT REMINDS YOU OF YOUR EXWIFE? INCLUDING PAST PAPER LOVE
GONE BAD?lol

michael1313's photo
Tue 11/07/06 09:52 AM
this is th part of live and let live,in poems and song...
great poems all come from th hearts of lost love...