Topic: Sad
TrueJedi's photo
Sat 11/03/07 06:25 PM
I have this hole in heart
it happens whenever were apart

I look up to the sky and see a dove
oh boy, i really think I am in love

I know that were are seperated by miles
I get a good feeling when I see your lovely smiles


debrat's photo
Sat 11/03/07 06:26 PM
very nice...good to read a non depressing poem

TrueJedi's photo
Sat 11/03/07 06:27 PM
thanks, first time I ever wrote a poem.

debrat's photo
Sat 11/03/07 06:28 PM
really?? ive wriiten several but only just now shared one on the internet its on recent topics look and see what you think

TrueJedi's photo
Sat 11/03/07 06:29 PM
yep really , I will look at it

Differentkindofwench's photo
Sat 11/03/07 06:30 PM
It seems the force is with you :wink:

eileena9's photo
Sat 11/03/07 06:47 PM
TJ.....very nice work, my friend!! I hope that it is true and you found someone who makes you feel so good!!flowerforyou smooched

blonderockermom's photo
Tue 11/06/07 09:16 PM
Very nice Jedi..:smile: flowerforyou