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Edited by
poppashroom
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Tue 05/17/16 06:11 PM
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I feel my knees
dig into the sand, As the tide flows in I feel your hand, For a short time we share a cresting wave, Crashing together And Knackedly bathe. A tributary of tears As our hands depart From this place of where We did start A tear falls Under moons good grace A salt track of pain Is the only trace I will remain Here upon the sand Waiting again To hold your hand |
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Very nice sentiment.. and great analogy.. a lot better than
'looking at the same moon' Super..:-) |
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Thank you Sher for kind comment
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I love being Knackedly with you xxx I am going to buy you a dictionary lol xxx
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I love being Knackedly with you xxx I am going to buy you a dictionary lol xxx [/q etuote] Xxc |
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That was very beautiful..
Rayne |
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Wow that's awesome
I love it |
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What a beautiful expression this is.
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Thank you all, very kind words, for my wife
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Speaks of passion and romance and anticipation. Nice write.
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Speaks of passion and romance and anticipation. Nice write. Thank you from poppashroom. We are now together in New Zealand but shall still haunt this site |
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