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Topic: Happy Halloween Story......Booooooooooo!!!!
Noden's photo
Wed 10/31/07 04:44 AM
Noden's Halloween Story

One spooky Halloween night, Noden went trick or treating dressed as a vampire, Noden's favorite halloween costume. "Where is Bonnymiss?" Noden wondered unhappily, tired of waiting. "Bonnymiss is late, and I can't go trick or treating alone!"

Just then, a bush near Noden started to move! The leaves trembled and a cry rang out. Noden was frightened but bravely said, "Who's there?" Suddenly, a werewolf jumped from behind the bush! The werewolf shouted, "Boo! Guess who!" Noden knew who it was right away and said, "Bonnymiss, you silly thing. You scared me! Where have you been all this time?"

Laughing, Bonnymiss said, "You're a scaredy cat! Sorry I'm late, but there was a problem with my costume and I couldn't meet you sooner. Let's go trick or treating. There'll be no candy left for us if we wait any longer." "That's okay," Noden said. "Let's get started. I want some Halloween candy tonight!"

Noden suggested they go east first. Several houses looked promising that way, and Noden remembered that the folks in one particular house gave out great candy and were fun to visit. However, just as they started walking, Noden and Bonnymiss heard a scary howling noise. "What's that?" Bonnymiss said, shivering. All of a sudden a black cat ran out from under some bushes very close to their feet. The cat streaked in front of them, running very fast across the lawn. Frightened, Noden and Bonnymiss screamed in terror! Nothing else was in sight, and all was quiet. "It's only a silly old cat," Noden said. "It won't hurt us." Bonnymiss said with a nervous laugh, "I guess we're both scaredy cats!" "I guess we are!" Noden agreed, laughing, too. "But let's get going. We'll never get any Halloween candy unless we knock on some doors tonight."

Their hearts still pounding a little, Noden and Bonnymiss walked along the street. The first house they came to was creepy-looking and very old. It sat back from the street more than the other houses in the neighborhood. A long sidewalk lead up to a front porch that looked like it had seen better days. In the moonlight, the house looked deserted, but lights glowed through the windows. Bonnymiss whispered, "I think I remember somebody telling me that this house is haunted." "No way," Noden said, confidently pushing open the gate. Suddenly, a strong gust of wind rustled the leaves of the willow tree standing nearby and a loud crash came from the porch. Both friends jumped at the noise. "It's just the wind," Noden said a little shakily. Although Noden and Bonnymiss felt a little nervous, they walked slowly through the creaky front gate and up the long sidewalk towards the front door.

The old stairs creaked as they climbed onto the porch. Lying on the floor of the porch they saw a broken flower pot. "That's what made the loud crash we heard," Noden said. "See? There's nothing scary here." "Yeah, right," Bonnymiss said, "Go ahead, Noden. You knock on the door."

Just then Noden and Bonnymiss saw a large, strange shadow behind the wavy glass in the front door. Suddenly, the shadow started moving towards them! Before they could knock or even think, the door flew open! A large Ginger Snaps stood before them! Noden and Bonnymiss shouted and jumped back with a start! Bonnymiss turned to run away.

"Wait! Happy Halloween vampire and werewolf!" the large Ginger Snaps said, laughing. "Great costumes! Don't you two want some candy?" Bonnymiss said, "Hey, I remember that voice! I know who you are! You're Lexfonteyne!"

Lexfonteyne said, smiling. "That's right, and you're Bonnymiss. Welcome to my house. You and Noden are my first guests tonight. How about some treats?"

A little while later, Noden and Bonnymiss called out "Thanks! Bye, Lexfonteyne!" as they walked down the sidewalk, their trick or treat bags full of Halloween candy. Bonnymiss said, "Noden, you knew all along that was Lexfonteyne's house, didn't you!" "Yes, I knew. The trick is on you!" Noden said. "Lexfonteyne is a friend of my folks and I've been to that house before. You know it isn't safe to trick or treat at a stranger's house, so that's why I suggested going there." "That's right," Bonnymiss said. "It's better to be safe than sorry!"

So, that Halloween night Noden and Bonnymiss had a great time trick or treating. And they followed all the safety rules to make it home safely, too. "I can't wait until next year!" they said together, smiling big smiles. Then Noden and Bonnymiss walked home, happily planning their costumes for next year all the way.


The End

tigerman1956's photo
Wed 10/31/07 05:05 AM
GREAT STORY, YOU SHOULD BE WRITING BOOKS.

lizardking19's photo
Wed 10/31/07 05:18 AM
ohhh i was hoping for a vicious ending where one of them turned out to be a monster and ate the others face off :(

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Wed 10/31/07 05:53 AM
NICE STORY
HAPPY HALLOWEEN

CATBW56's photo
Wed 10/31/07 05:54 AM
Happy Halloween (insert Pumpkins, ghouls and gobblins here)flowerforyou

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Wed 10/31/07 05:59 AM
Excellent story, i just wish i was behind door # 2!!!!:wink: happy

Noden's photo
Wed 10/31/07 06:34 AM
Thanks everyone, glad you enjoyed the spooky story, sry if it didn't end in a goul, bloody scene, maybe next year, ha!!!!


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Ella1's photo
Wed 10/31/07 06:41 AM
Happy Halloween!!!!! Great story!!!! Loved that it stared two of my favorite people!!!

devil devil flowerforyou flowerforyou bigsmile bigsmile glasses glasses

Noden's photo
Wed 10/31/07 06:47 AM
:heart: Your welcome, Ella, and Happy Halloween!!!:heart:

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Wed 10/31/07 09:56 AM
I like that story!

Plus I figure there must be some royalties down the road....

:wink:

eileena9's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:16 AM
Figures he would live in a scary house!!laugh laugh


Nice story!!flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 10/31/07 10:22 AM
You have no idea....

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Although for some reason I have noticed a lot of ladybugs in here lately....

widowerseeking's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:32 AM
am surprised lex didn't eat the gals...

Noden's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:37 AM
Thanks guys,,,,now off with you's go get Lex, some candies, blaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww,,!!!!!!!

Lex, Eileena, widowseekingflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

Happy Halloween....BOOOOOOOO!!!

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Wed 10/31/07 10:47 AM
Im headed for home, Ya all have a happy, safe Holloween!!!drinker

yokoke's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:52 AM
Great Story!!laugh Can only imagine the illustrations lol

Yokoke throws treats to everyone and wishes JSH a Happy Halloween!! Stay Safe! flowerforyou drinker




Noden's photo
Wed 10/31/07 10:58 AM
Bye Mikey, thanks a bunch for the chat, friend.flowerforyou

Yokoke, thanks for the treats, gottaaa , give to Lex though.laugh laugh laugh laugh


Treat or treat everyone....

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Wed 10/31/07 10:58 AM
great storyflowerforyou
thanks for sharing

Noden's photo
Wed 10/31/07 11:02 AM
:heart: Your welcome Heartsoul, and hi, nice to meet you,:heart:

Happy Halloween, Boo!!devil

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 10/31/07 11:58 AM
{{{{{{{{{ HAPPY HALLOWEEN Y'ALL }}}}}}}}}}}}
Great story Noden,thank you for making me a part of it. I should have known that Lex would be involved, he's never forgiven me for starting that fan club for him laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh laugh
Next year we go to Michael's house bigsmile

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