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Edited by
Ladywind7
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Mon 04/11/16 03:37 AM
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Observation -
Lukewarm verses hot; is shame upon me, shame upon you. Settling for less is quartered and hung words. It is time to razor the past. Watch blood and ink spill from our veins, tongue and shadows that dripped life screaming silence. No more! Mouth Indian blue. I shall not silence the roar of quill, of want flooding this soul. Erupting into much, much more than the spoken word. Watch these eyes They are a Watchtower. |
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Passion oozes from these ardent words, LW7. It's flattering that my expression inspired a sequel.
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Ha. You have a fanbase here....may the changing of seasons inspire us all.
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Your excellent poem inspires me to embrace the rebirth of Spring.
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Love this.
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Dang...I'm sorry..I loved this!!!!
I thought I posted already..   
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Wow..This is very good my Lady. Very Lukewarm.
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Observation - Lukewarm verses hot; is shame upon me, shame upon you. Settling for less is quartered and hung words. It is time to razor the past. Watch blood and ink spill from our veins, tongue and shadows that dripped life screaming silence. No more! Mouth Indian blue. I shall not silence the roar of quill, of want flooding this soul. Erupting into much, much more than the spoken word. Watch these eyes They are a Watchtower. This is the inspiration I need to write . . . thanks!!! |
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Thank you all. Comments are always appreciated here on Mingle. It gives me pleasure to know my words can touch, poke or strike a chord somewhere on this crazy globe we inhabit.
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Thank You I needed to read this.
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I LOVE tumbling verse! It reflects the way we think in shock, when our thought dynamics powerfully staccato.
Growth often has its roots deep within chaos, and our stunned staccato words can be our initial foundation stones - a pathway to a new solid future. To turn those words into an art form is not always easy as essentially they amount to a curative process. Of course tumbling verse is used elsewhere, and only the writer ever truly understands their full import. Healing drifts on a warm wind. |
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Tue 04/26/16 08:10 AM
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Ladywind,
Observation. You are the watchtower. That is so heavy. I loved reading and feeling you in that. Thank you so much Babe. tommo |
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Why Alaska? I want to visit....
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Wed 04/27/16 09:48 AM
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I'm used to the cold weather and have lived up in the far north for many years. I'm really looking forward to Sept. 12th, 2016 which is when I'll fly out from Dublin airport - to Anchorage Alaska.
Ladywind, I'm alone. You can come and live with me anytime. Just in case you may want to. Just let me know. |
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This was very powerful Ladywind. Well done!
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Thanks ladies and gentlemen for your kind comments.
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