Topic: an unfinished poem/song/life | |
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listening to the songs of my yesterday
let the words lift me up,and take me away away from this life that ive come to know back to a place where we use to go happy were we arms entwined as we walk along lyrics and tune together like our favorite song can you hear the words speak of the love that use to be and when the song plays on does it remind you of me as the song plays on do the memories flash by and when the violins begin do you still cry i play the song again as i start my life i try to forget that your not here, my wife now my life is just words,you see no one here to sing along with me no tune to my lyrics, the songs not the same no lyrics to your tune, our song has no name the violins are playing can you hear them above do they still make you cry.....my love writings from the tombs.... |
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Very Nice!!!
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Honey by Bobby Goldsborough does this to me, You have struck a chord, very creative and thought provoking.............Beautiful!
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bonnymiss..thats funny how you should mention that song thats one that i listened to as i wrote this thank you..thank yall for comments or criticism ..every artist must suffer..it helps convey feelings
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Beautiful writing from the soul
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Very beautiful, and sincere
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