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Topic: Half
plastic_pancakes Joined Sun 10/18/09 Posts: 7399	Wed 03/02/16 11:44 AM
Happy and free in the glass house, getting stoned. No one can ever really know you 'til you go on your own. Your guitar to pawn, the gravel lawn. Gentle bites and bitter yawns. The yarn absorbs peace that I wrap 'round my neck. And my working-class noose ties a severance check. And my heart is broke as the clip on my pen, except one's ****ing useless and the other's getting bent.

Dreadaye Joined Fri 03/29/13 Posts: 687	Wed 03/02/16 12:47 PM
Good to read you again plastic_pancakes

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Wed 03/02/16 01:20 PM
...half ourselves, half not, half heart. i enjoyed reading your poem.... ...thank you, plastic_panckakes.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Wed 03/02/16 06:35 PM
Powerful feelings, powerful expression. Hang in there poet.

peggy122 Joined Sun 12/27/15 Posts: 6525	Thu 03/03/16 01:42 AM
Great imagery. Strong content

2KidsMom Joined Tue 09/30/08 Posts: 58206	Tue 03/08/16 07:19 PM
As always,it bleeds life as I read. ((((((Colin)))))

Ainjel Joined Sat 01/24/09 Posts: 3610	Thu 03/10/16 07:27 PM
Perfecto...

Bahitieva Joined Mon 11/23/15 Posts: 2443	Fri 03/11/16 02:36 PM
Deep and strong meaning. Love this.

mzrosie Joined Wed 08/14/13 Posts: 33997	Fri 03/11/16 04:30 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem, plastic. Looking forward to reading more.

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