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i've been robbed
yeah, been broken into and emptied my own personal stash stolen all that holding on years of hoarding gone just like that now theres no place to hide nothing more held deep inside i've been emptied vandalized and looted you walked right in slick as a knife took all I had all you needed I tried to fight back tried to hang on tight but you, quiet insidious thief in the night were stronger you robbed me blind your tools of the trade honed on my savings now I'm broke 'cause you ... ... have... ...stolen ... ...my heart ... |
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that's great!! an awesome poem!! i can't wait till someone steals my
Beautiful poetry!! |
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WHAT A COOL POEM, THANKS FOR SHARING
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I'm with you on that one mswizard
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Thank you cool cats and dolls.....I love sharing my work with you all.....
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Oh, that hurts, such pain devatastion, taking all you have to offer.
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It can be painful....
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nice
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POWERFUL AND WELL WRITTEN. MY SENTIMENTS EXACTLY. THANKS FOR WRITING WITH SUCH EMOTION.
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Very cool mswizard
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"POWERFUL AND WELL WRITTEN. MY SENTIMENTS EXACTLY. THANKS FOR WRITING WITH SUCH EMOTION"
Thank you pkd~I appreciate your comments |
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"nice"
Geo~ |
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"Very cool mswizard"
Thank you rocker, I always appreciate your comments p.s. LOVE the Rolling Stone cover you've got up...!! |
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Ur Welcome...
And yea, Gotta love that cover!! |
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Damn (((Alicia))) did somebody beat me to it???!!! I was all dressed up in my cat burglar outfit and everything! Oh well Long as I'm here and all dressed up..... I'll steal a kiss
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"Damn (((Alicia))) did somebody beat me to it???!!! I was all dressed up in my cat burglar outfit and everything! Oh well Long as I'm here and all dressed up..... I'll steal a kiss"
awwwww you can steal into my window anytime honey |
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and should I get caught stealing this kiss?
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You do have a flare with that pen of yours!
I truly enjoy how you mold your words to tug on my heart. |
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