Topic: My bottle of water
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Fri 01/01/16 12:42 AM
I sat

A silent room

Nothing but a bottle of water for company

Pondering my life, my worth

Thoughts crossing my mind

Imagine the ocean suddenly ran dry

The tap suddenly parched

How differently I would look at my bottle of water

How I would now hold it close to my heart

How I would appreciate it for it's simple beauty

The key to my life


You are my bottle of water

I have passed you by without a thought

Never appreciating how important you are to me

Taking sips of your love whenever I needed you

Closing the cap until I need you again


I read a quote one day, it said

'Appreciation is a wonderful thing. It makes what is excellent in others belong to us as well'

So this is not a love poem, my mind couldn't write something so special

It's just a simple note to say

Thank you

Annierooroo's photo
Fri 01/01/16 02:49 AM
Beautiful Joe I love it

I thought yes I do take something that is so precious for granted when one day it might not be
Thanks

jacktrades's photo
Fri 01/01/16 05:54 AM
That's pretty good Joe.

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Fri 01/01/16 05:59 AM
Good stuff Joe. A great reminder to spend more time being grateful for what we do have, and less time fretting about what we don't.

1Marie63's photo
Fri 01/01/16 06:30 AM
Wonderful, Joe. I enjoyed reading this.

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Sat 01/02/16 05:11 PM
This is really interesting. Wish I had written it.

Goes into those "Poems of Life I've Lived' category. Bravo.

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Sat 01/02/16 06:03 PM
drinker drinker :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Sat 01/23/16 03:32 PM
Love this......lovelove
I learn not to take things for granted. To appreciate simple things in life

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Sat 01/23/16 03:54 PM
Many times we take for granted, what we hold within our hands... And never realize it till later..

Very nice ~~~:thumbsup: