Topic: Full of Emptiness
technovative's photo
Sat 12/26/15 12:19 PM
Receding...
The floor of this caffeine chalice is exposed
Almost bare

A burnt-umber puddle survives the last sip
One more swallow

This tepid flood soothes a wanting heart
Dilutes the urgency of this souls need to bare

Blinding...
The morning sun stings these atrophied eyes
Sleepy shuffle

With a gonzo gait stumble to the curbside perch
Check the mailbox

Again this hollow tunnel yields no words of comfort
Step back inside these familiar enveloping walls

Determined...
Wake the portal to the world resting on this table
Anxious typing

Give the guardian the key that unlocks the gate
Check for email

Again a blank page displays "no new messages"
This bare white screen stings atrophied eyes

Realization...
These vacant vessels hold no intended malice
Completely neutral

A solution suspends within their open confines
Null substitution

This surrogate substance displaces the void
A placebo until the satiating refill arrives

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Sat 12/26/15 12:24 PM
Powerful as always

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Sat 12/26/15 12:32 PM
though i am not in literature and poetry. but for this poetry is i can say "this is it" outstanding.

technovative's photo
Sat 12/26/15 12:57 PM
I appreciate you fellas reading and commenting.

CloudsandRain's photo
Sat 12/26/15 01:12 PM
:heart: Powerful and Deep words from a broken heart and soul in need of some human cuddling. I am a writer as well and everything I have ever written pales in comparison to this♥
New Year's Blessings for healed hearts for both of us♥
Lynn

Ladywind7's photo
Sat 12/26/15 01:47 PM
Your poem made me feel the hope and then the bitter taste of unmet expectations, which we all remember.
Mingle hug to you and keep sharing your poems, they are great waving

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Sat 12/26/15 01:56 PM
Thank you for sharing, it was a great read.

technovative's photo
Sat 12/26/15 03:35 PM
I'm humbled by you lovely ladies kind words, thank you. flowerforyou