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Receding...
The floor of this caffeine chalice is exposed Almost bare A burnt-umber puddle survives the last sip One more swallow This tepid flood soothes a wanting heart Dilutes the urgency of this souls need to bare Blinding... The morning sun stings these atrophied eyes Sleepy shuffle With a gonzo gait stumble to the curbside perch Check the mailbox Again this hollow tunnel yields no words of comfort Step back inside these familiar enveloping walls Determined... Wake the portal to the world resting on this table Anxious typing Give the guardian the key that unlocks the gate Check for email Again a blank page displays "no new messages" This bare white screen stings atrophied eyes Realization... These vacant vessels hold no intended malice Completely neutral A solution suspends within their open confines Null substitution This surrogate substance displaces the void A placebo until the satiating refill arrives |
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Powerful as always
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though i am not in literature and poetry. but for this poetry is i can say "this is it" outstanding.
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I appreciate you fellas reading and commenting.
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Powerful and Deep words from a broken heart and soul in need of some human cuddling. I am a writer as well and everything I have ever written pales in comparison to this♥
New Year's Blessings for healed hearts for both of us♥ Lynn |
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Your poem made me feel the hope and then the bitter taste of unmet expectations, which we all remember.
Mingle hug to you and keep sharing your poems, they are great |
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Thank you for sharing, it was a great read.
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I'm humbled by you lovely ladies kind words, thank you.
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