nightmares invade the tombs at night
nights forever when theres no light
taking away every part of me
ceasing to feel reality

the bullet is close the end is near
can i pull the trigger,my only fear
deep in the dark is where i dwell
discomfort in my own living hell

drops of blood cover the floor
ive bled the past, cant bleed no more
the tears i never learned to shed
are the tears you can cry when i am dead

deep and dark eternally lost
never prepared to...pay the cost
love is the most sinister of all
it leaves you lonely after the fall

no one around me,so no one to see
what losing love has done to me
ive spent three years licking my wounds
alone in my deepest darkest tombs...



writings from the tombs...

death is rarely poetic.

there are other ways to express oneself.

God thats morbid isn't it?

Love is painful and losing love i have no words to fully describe the lose,,, Cry your tears, for I do see you,,,

Hugs

sad, brilliant and so heartfelt

Well, the grammar leaves something to be desired, but the meter is flawless..

I give it a 9!!!

iandirac: does the name edgar allen poe ring any bells im sure if he were alive he might have differed with your opinion..just a thought

it is morbid but i love it.....i think it sounds great. sounds kind of like some of the things i write actually. but i think it is really beautiful. don't let anyone knock you down because being able to write like that is a beautful, amazing artform that not many will ever have. let it come to you as it does.

well thank you danni i feel sometimes you have to write them down to get them off of you

yes you do.....been there many times. your welcome

per haps you would be interested in my other ones i would like to see what you think of them also

TomRaider

There is a reason for my name as I assume there is one for yours.

Perhaps the obvious nature of this has escaped you.

And yes, I am arrogant.

and your point is...

actually i couldnt come up with a name that would express how much of an arrogant ass i am so i just settled for what i was watching on t.v lol

I don't require one

yeah i would love to see some of them.

no iandirac you dont have one

you haven't figured it out, have you?

danni go to all post into poems ,jokes and quotes and look up my name there are several there i would appreciate your thoughts on these thx

iandirac theres no point it benefits me none

correct