Topic: see.........me
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Mon 10/22/07 07:58 PM
Touch me...with your eyes.
see.........me
...the real me.

Not this animated body I use
to propel me through
this mundane existence;
a body susceptible to disease
and addictions
through neglect, abuse...ignorance.
see.........me.

Not this whirlwind of carnal cravings
that I express in a moment of
self-centered, unfocused weakness;
desiring with only fleeting,
temporary fulfillment.
see.........me.

Not as the "fantasy of me" that
you conjure up in your mind
through your biased judgments,
opinions and selfish feelings.
see.........me.

Touch me, with the eyes of eternity.
see.........me
...the real me.

Notice the vibrant life force
that emanates from within this
physical vehicle;
spontaneous, synchronistic...alive.
see.........me.

Notice the compassion that flows
through generous fingertips,
warm smiles, knowing eyes;
desireless...caring.
see.........me.

Notice the unconditional,
limitlessness that radiates out...
silently touching without expectations.
see.........me.

See the divinity...I am
...and that...you are.

coco56's photo
Mon 10/22/07 08:01 PM
very nice flowerforyou

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Mon 10/22/07 08:23 PM
Thank you, sweetheart!!

coco56's photo
Mon 10/22/07 08:25 PM
your welcome flowerforyou

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Mon 10/22/07 08:39 PM
It is very nice...flowerforyou

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Tue 10/23/07 04:52 AM
Appreciated young lady!!

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Tue 10/23/07 04:59 AM
Very intense..enjoyed reading it Jesse:smile:

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 10/23/07 08:39 AM
Lovely Jesse!

flowerforyou happy

pkh's photo
Tue 10/23/07 08:50 AM
very nice

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Tue 10/23/07 03:56 PM
CCP - You know what it's like to feel something within and try to pull it out and plant it on paper. Thanks...deeply.

MsTeddyBear * pkh - It's always nice to hear from others that connect with what you feel. Gratefully, 8)

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Tue 10/23/07 04:11 PM
Awwwww very nice could not have said it better if only others took the time to see the real person within.bigsmile flowerforyou

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Tue 10/23/07 04:19 PM
wow...flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Tue 10/23/07 04:32 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Tue 10/23/07 04:51 PM
TxsGal...I agree wholeheartedly. People are too interested in "reacting" to life around them, instead of enjoying the variety of interplays that happen every moment.

bgeorge * LAMom, Thanks for the approval and flowers, that's sweet! :)

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Tue 10/23/07 06:51 PM
Your welcome. I actually came back to read it again, revisiting is something I seldom do...:smile:
drinker drinker

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Tue 10/23/07 09:15 PM
Thank you and very true. I always wonder when people try to tell me how I think or how I am. Most never figure me out as a person-everything seems based on externals.flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 10/24/07 03:49 PM
Absolutely true pkd. Most people view others on what they see externally. Sometimes they'll pick up on the other persons' feelings or what they are saying but, MOST of the time what people see in others is a filtered view of their own mindsets. Through their own likes and dislikes. People never truly see other people for who they really are because they're too busy looking at themselves. Sad to say, but true.

You tapped into the poem pretty well. Maybe you are someone who can see others for who they truly are without judgment.

Namaste :)

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Wed 10/24/07 03:51 PM
very nice:smile: flowerforyou

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Wed 10/24/07 03:52 PM
TxsGal....Where did you get all those lips? You must be one "heck" of a kisser! LOL!!

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Wed 10/24/07 03:58 PM
Thanks blonderockermom.

Always love to get flowers from a lady.

Glad to hear you found your beau. Fortunate fellow indeed.