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Topic: Little things
joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Sun 12/20/15 01:57 PM
Standing at the sink Doing the dishes Her hands on your hips Lean around A kiss on your lips you wash I'll dry Talk about the day How time flies by A stroll through the park A boat on a lake Feeding the ducks We name one Jake A silly little poem You recall I wrote About the two of us Sitting in a boat Out in the evening Going down of the sun The little things Making life fun The way you laugh The way you smile There is a God Hey, you fancy a walk down the aisle?

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Sun 12/20/15 02:00 PM
This is so very sweet Joe. Thanks for sharing.

1Marie63 Joined Sat 09/05/15 Posts: 6737	Sun 12/20/15 05:31 PM
Lovely. Well done Joe

TMommy Joined Fri 05/10/13 Posts: 9850	Sun 12/20/15 06:02 PM
very sweet

Annierooroo Joined Mon 10/20/14 Posts: 12552	Sun 12/20/15 07:05 PM
Yes that was beautiful, Joe

PacificStar48 Joined Tue 10/02/07 Posts: 13764	Mon 12/21/15 12:38 PM
Standing at the sink Doing the dishes Her hands on your hips Lean around A kiss on your lips you wash I'll dry Talk about the day How time flies by A stroll through the park A boat on a lake Feeding the ducks We name one Jake A silly little poem You recall I wrote About the two of us Sitting in a boat Out in the evening Going down of the sun The little things Making life fun The way you laugh The way you smile There is a God Hey, you fancy a walk down the aisle? Awe sounds like a great wedding proposal. You old romantic. Ya getting it memorized to use? We need another Mingle land wedding to keep the masses believing. It does happen folks.

technovative Joined Sat 03/01/14 Posts: 2644	Tue 12/22/15 03:04 PM
What a charming scene you've painted here Joe.

elana624 Joined Wed 12/30/09 Posts: 11	Tue 01/05/16 01:17 AM
Awesome,relatable!

Annierooroo Joined Mon 10/20/14 Posts: 12552	Tue 01/05/16 02:49 AM
Whose the lucky lady? Good on you, she will be blessed. Sorry If I'm jumping the gun.

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Thu 01/07/16 04:43 AM


Bahitieva Joined Mon 11/23/15 Posts: 2443	Thu 01/21/16 07:17 AM
Awww....that is sooooo sweet.

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Fri 09/23/16 09:37 AM
I'm up first I make your coffee I love it when you say Gis a kiss you big softy A toss of your hair was all it took And I stood there being read like a book Lets get in the car We're going for a drive Don't ask where It's a little surprise Down on the beach Hand in hand Laughing as we make silly faces in the sand Waiting for the moment You look so pretty That glint in your eye Making me giddy Its now or never That melting smile Down on one knee You wanna walk down the aisle

tmh1063 Joined Fri 07/01/16 Posts: 1965	Fri 09/23/16 12:19 PM
Beautiful Joe, thanks for sharing. Are you in love?

joethebricky Joined Sat 08/04/12 Posts: 12740	Fri 09/23/16 04:46 PM
Beautiful Joe, thanks for sharing. Are you in love? Your question made me smile Thanks for the comment

iammavis29 Joined Thu 07/03/14 Posts: 1046	Fri 09/23/16 04:51 PM
You have a knack for making interesting writings. That is so sweet

no1phD Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 27442	Fri 09/23/16 05:17 PM
Ohhh.. it's a poem!.. I thought we were going to talk about little things.. So I came running right in...lol

Madcatlady01 Joined Sun 08/07/16 Posts: 338	Sat 09/24/16 08:28 AM
Very beautiful. Of course you don't have to be in love to write a lovely love poem. But when you are the results can be stunning. Whoever she is or was or may be in the future she's a lucky lady