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Just curious about others points of view
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Just curious about others points of view , any suggestions ... Thanks |
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hi I m anil 30 male
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Hi , I am looking for feedback on my profile
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Nice profile, simple and to the point. I think it will serve you well.
If I were to offer a critique, I might say that as you mention you are from "over-seas," you might mention that you have "settled here for the moment" or something of the such to emphasize that you are "from" where you say you are located. Or maybe switch it from saying you are "from over-seas" to "you'll hear a little ____ accent in my voice as I was born in ____." Just a suggestion though. |
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Nice profile, simple and to the point. I think it will serve you well. If I were to offer a critique, I might say that as you mention you are from "over-seas," you might mention that you have "settled here for the moment" or something of the such to emphasize that you are "from" where you say you are located. Or maybe switch it from saying you are "from over-seas" to "you'll hear a little ____ accent in my voice as I was born in ____." Just a suggestion though. ^^ agree ^^ Or perhaps..."I am originally from ______, but have been settled here for ____ years" It is important to stand out from the scammers, not nice I know, but such is life on Mingle! People may think you just want a visa, so you need to subtly imply that that's not what you're about. Tell us why you moved over if it isn't too personal...was it work related or you visited and decided to relocate? This would also give any potential females something to open up a conversation with. All the best in your search. |
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Thanks for the input and it's greatly appreciates
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More photos including a full body shot. I'd add something about the type of woman you seek. Otherwise, the blurb is good.
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Nice improvements, I feel like I know you better already!
Agree with the need for more photos. Though I'm still getting around to doing mine so I can't say much about that! |
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