Topic: selfish one
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Thu 10/18/07 12:44 AM
dreams gone loneliness sets
fears sorrow regrets come passing
through my mind in my life
thoughts clashing
where did i go wrong
emptiness fills the void *
sightless destination
embraces are cold
never knew love
dont know how to love
tired mind but i cant sleep
im a man so
i cant weep
wrap me in warmth
let me know youll stay
can you be trusted or
will you... go away
thoughts turn dark and
sometimes gray
mirrors staring back at me
but i cant look i
dont like what i see
always doing for others theres
nothing left of me
time is short theres
no time today
it winds down every
day turns to night
and the night has
come again i reach
out and pretend theres
somewhere someone past
haunts the mind
taunts me to
believe ill finish
this life one
second thought stillness
invades the hands wont
stop the trembles the
hand drops crimson red
stains the floors
a scream the end
of a dream the
smell of smoke fills
the air hopeless thoughts
end..do you dare


writings from the tombs...

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Thu 10/18/07 12:49 AM
That was deep
Not to mention summed up some old memories
Good postdrinker

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Thu 10/18/07 12:53 AM

You had me at,

"...wrap me in warmth
let me know you'll stay
can you be trusted or
will you... go away..."

:heart:

Thanks for sharing this! flowerforyou

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Thu 10/18/07 12:58 AM
Someday, I'd like to find out exactly the type of tombs you raid, who, where, what did they cause anger, guilt, disgust all of the above perhaps. I usually end up seeing another person on a very, very similar path in your writings. Not always a fun journey, but definitely one worth taking, paying attention to, and growing from.

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Thu 10/18/07 01:15 AM
:cry: thank you

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Thu 10/18/07 08:27 AM
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Thu 10/18/07 10:36 AM
Awwwwww Tomb... flowerforyou

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Tue 10/23/07 12:46 AM
awesome