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I'm fairly new to Mingle2 or online dating in general ~ what do you think of my profile? Anything I can do to improve it? Thanks for looking!
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Hi Welcome to Mingle
Best wishes in your search. I actually enjoyed your profile I believe it is well written there will be others that may tell you it is too long. While it is a bit long it is informative and I get a picture of who you are. In saying all that I don't like your main profile picture sorry. I don't I did look at your others and well I am going to hold off on which one I like the best.. If it was me I would get a new head shot being relaxed and casual Good luck out here |
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It is all cool about ur achievements but about half way through it started to look more like autobiography. Shorten it up. Not sure that here are many readers. It's all audiobooks now. Lol. Good luck guy.
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The photos are entertaining and the writing is good, but...
1)Sitka makes a good point about a completely different photo for your main. 2)It felt like you used the pronoun I 200 times. Your blurb gives a feeling of someone trying too hard to sound impressive. It will not fly in this medium simply because people can, and do, lie about anything on these sites. You're better off keeping it simple and less self-aggrandizing. Let people figure out how great you are instead of trying to hit them over the head with it in virtually every sentence. |
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love that show Prospectors always wanted to try that.I thought your profile was interesting.I left Denver in June do miss CO good luck
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The pictures are good.
Your blurb is a good read. Good luck in your search. Welcome to Mingle. |
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Thanks guys for the feedback! I'll tighten it up and choose a different pic ^^
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