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She sits on ivory throne of inlaid gold
This Queen of my rhelm Love and passion, like white lion twins at her feet She rules Her wish my command, I await her desire Her smile my great reward She speaks, I listen with no word missed Rushing to be the bearer of her craving Noble, but with no question, I serve Seeking only favor in her eyes I pray for but her glance, a word Recognition of my being Days seem lifetimes, still I attend Rapt in the shadow of her presence Longing to be her chosen, I train Honing skills for her pleasure My Queen is she, of Pagan beauty Worshipped on her throne Her every wish I'll grant to her For I am King in this rhelm |
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Thats really really beautiful...
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very interesting and quite flowing.
what does the word rhelm mean? i cannot find it, but i find realm. is that the same thing? |
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Your majastey... (boughs down)
Great poem |
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nobody's perfect
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Awwwww (((Ms Teddy))) You are a Queen in your "realm" (for Duffy thanks) and you never need humble yourself in my court
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love it, very powerful, can't wait to meet the king
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You majesty **he kneels** YOUR throne awaits you!
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very nice so glad your queen has come to you,stop and say hi to me while your in Wisconsin
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Awesome Npp very good the Queen should be very pleased with the King.
Very nice thought indeed, could you just try to get the image of that happening in reality. Sssssssshhhhhs myself would not want to be put up on a pedestal ssshh to far to fall lol. Really liked the poem |
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(((Teresa))) sorry I missed seeing your reply sorry sweetie. Thank you
(((Kristi))) How can you fall from a pedestal if you don't allow one built for you. She likes the idea of walking beside me. |
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(((Pam))) to thine own heart be true. I wish only your happiness always. Your smile and friendship has been, and always will be, a GREAT treasure
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Awwww you just answered it lol
See you said" She likes the idea of walking beside me. For they should walk sid by side and share things in life as they come, never to walk ahead of the other as if they are better no behind for they are not good enough. Two people should be on the same level never one above the other, they should be equals instead. Hummm now ya catch my drift lol |
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very very nice.
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So there you have it. I have been here four months. I laid my heart out, found friendship and romance, touched hearts and souls that I will hold dear forever. You've all read my poems, seen my soul, my desire. Some have knocked on my hearts door, but when opened were scared to enter. My "Misty" challenges my knightly, poetic soul. She simply wasn't.... "looking". I found in her what every poem I have ever written of desire was about. Gave it meaning. Gave me hope. Some "relationships" I have found in here, things we have shared, I will never regret, for they are and will always be, fond memories. I love you all!
I will be the first to admit, that I don't know a thing about (sorry baby) Love. I do know the desire of it however, as she does, and it is our wish to discover it together. So this morning we decided to "just hang" together and see what the future holds. Surprizingly enough, our "black books" are friends as well as interests, and we're both ok with that, for isn't that what we say? FRIENDS FIRST! So it's "look but don't touch!" for this guy, and I look forward to sharing my new joy with all of you....my friends! |
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Thank you heather
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Awwwwwwwwww all I can say it could not have happen to a better person. I wish you both the best Humm yeah I had to go look at this lady that has got your full attention. Funny looks like a perfect match to me !! May the sun always be at your back to give your warmth a gentle breeze to remind you to move forward and you only hear laughter and see smiles when you look at each other.
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I am very happy for you as well my friend. I knew it wouldn't be long before your words guided you to the one you were supposed to meet. Good luck to you both. I wish you both light.
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I love you both....ALL, very much. I have taken much from here in all the words and blessings. I now give back desiring to share my journey with my friends, to join in our dance. I give you love in duplicate for my heart is shared and no longer alone.
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Good morning beautiful ..... I know you'll be "stopping by" here to read this
Thinking of you.... and lovin it!!!!!!!!!! |
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