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Standing under the protection of a colorful canopy of friends swaying in the wind as one
Paths await in every direction though stepped on by others still are unknown Smells of fall dew and scattered leaves Light peeking through welcoming openings The cool autumn breeze dances throughout the gardens of beauty Silence screams out a musical acceptance to my presence Stones stand as wise soldiers and speak of the past Souls were created here Thoughts past on by invisible travelers No words are spoken but an understanding learned |
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What about a title like "Memories from the ancient ones" ? A nice poem by the way...
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Thank you for posting stylishdotcom
Sounds pretty close to me |
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for you as well Teddy
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Or magical memories, cuz your words are certainly magical my friend
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Thank you Blonde still working on it
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The Sentinels....awesome imagery here OL....gettin better and better with each word you write
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Thank you CCP still trying to find a style though
just rambles at this point but Thank you once again
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Ok so I got
"Memories from the ancient ones" magical memories and The Sentinels Thanks for the suggestions all |
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Beautiful as always,,,, |
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Thank you LAMom
any idea what to call it?
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still pondering a title,,,,
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that makes two of us
lmao |
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Awesome my friend love to see what goes through your
mind each day
"Autumn Memories" |
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Thanks TxsGal
Thats a good one as well |
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we call it good
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Reminds me of a place i used to go hiking as a girl. Full of mystery and wonder and peace. I could spend hours back in the caverns. Very nice...thank you for reminding me of the pleasant memories.
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Silent Echos - honey you never fail to make my sigh in envy...I truely wish my pen knew how to capture things as yours does...as always, i sigh
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How do you keep finding these fate?
I forgot about this one
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Thank you Blonde still working on it
that makes two of us