You're Choral Evensong

You're choral evensong still wafts across my ether,
I can hear ye clearly in the cool climes of your lofty heart songs,
Here lost in the damp, moist heather,
( Your gentleness like that of a soft falling feather, )

Meant to correct the sad body of all of my wrongs,

Tender is the night brought on by realms of your only grace,
Relevant songs that cry out to me, reach out to me,
To enter with ye into your holy place,
To swim out with ye across the welcoming sea,

Oh, how I want to be there with ye,
An Irishman warmed inside with your glow - your holy graces,

To climb out with ye into your holy night . . .
And be free.

Thom Carlisle ( Irish Tommy Moran ) - Ireland

Such a sweet melody.

Yep. You nailed this one Tommyboy101.

In my silent reading of this piece I hear/feel a clear transmission of the inspiration. Through the medium of words, you have penned a vehicle that enables our emotions to glide on the rhythm. Nothing surplus. Devoid of any trace of even a vapourous form excess that might secret itself into the readers attention, and so call for a re-reading in order to more finely tune in to the message. Fantastic! Congratulations.

regards

dreadaye

Tul, Dread,

Thank ye. This is an older piece. I was using a google notepad apparatus ' thingy ' which kept causing me problems with signing in. And, at times, this app would lose all of my whole project of over 145 poems placed there. My work would just disappear. So I dumped the scum bags and joined a site which allows for placement of my works. So far it seems to be secure. So far so good. I've gone through the rigors of starting all over cataloguing my long list of works with this new site.

At any rate, once the period of 5 plus straight hours was over and all of my works were installed there - page after lengthy page, I picked the above piece to re-enter here in Mingle2's Poems and Creative Writing forum. I didn't read it rather just did a copy and paste herein.

Thank ye both,

tommy boy moran / Ireland

Very Nice Tom

That was a lot to do. I hope it all works out!

Big Joe, Tul Honey,

Thanks both, so very much for your support in the matter of this causal scribbling on my part.

tommy boy moran / Ireland

This is so elegant.
Your poetry always soothes my soul.

I use Wordpress for my poems, it works for me.
Good luck with your poetry storage.

Ladywind7,

Thank ye for the comment concerning your using Wordpress. I shall visit soon and take a peek inside there for a looksee.

Thank ye, Darlin',

tommy boy moran / Ireland