Topic: The Wall
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Sun 10/14/07 03:09 PM
The Wall that i can not see
The Wall set between you and me
The Wall I know i cannot break
The Wall I know i cannot take
The Wall I know i cannot climb
The Wall that stands the test of time
The Wall that keeps me away from you
The Wall that leaves me nothing to do
The Wall put there by your past
The Wall i know will always last
The Wall I always seem to hit
The Wall that leaves me in the pit
The Wall that fills me with such fear
The Wall that does not let me near
The Wall that hits me in the head
The Wall i feel even in my bed
The Wall that carries you far away
The Wall that never lets you stay
The Wall that will break my heart
The Wall i know i must tear apart
james covington

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 10/14/07 03:12 PM
Try explode the wall up yet?

flowerforyou

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Sun 10/14/07 03:13 PM
Rip it down!! awesome words covington flowerforyou

malibu23wi's photo
Sun 10/14/07 03:20 PM
very moving writing!! sadly there are sooo many ppl who have walls up, including myself, and it's hard to let it down after being hurt when it was let down before...good luck ((hugs))

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Sun 10/14/07 03:27 PM
I am trying to tear it down but i have to be careful. not to get crushed in the debris

pkh's photo
Sun 10/14/07 03:32 PM
awww awesome words tear it down and live lifeflowerforyou

wouldee's photo
Sun 10/14/07 03:37 PM
walls??? no wonder i get trampled and plummeted and kicked and steppedon and....

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 10/14/07 05:18 PM
Very good one againflowerforyou


Remember walls are not built over night, nor can they be tore down with one hit. It takes a man with a true heart for the resons he is wanting to tear down those walls. And one with
lots of paitience and a true heart behind those motives then slowly with time the mortar will begin to lossen. And then when it is not on your mind those walls will come tumbling down. Then you will see the true beauty of the person within. You think you have already see it Naw but with time you will.bigsmile flowerforyou


Just don't give up or you surely miss what there is to seebigsmile flowerforyou

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Sun 10/14/07 06:23 PM
"the wall that never lets you stay..." tells me that she is in your present and not of your past. A desire shared will soon find a niche in that wall and the Sun will start to shine through.

Peace my friend, and patience drinker