Topic: for my tommy boy
tulip2633's photo
Sat 08/22/15 10:08 PM
Edited by tulip2633 on Sat 08/22/15 10:36 PM
For my Tommy boy

Moors on the path abandon
Wet dew upon it abides
Humming a mossy punctuate
Rhythmic sea subsides

Hear ye yonder glen
Triumphant poppies sound
Crackle the feral cat
Glistening wings abound

Fiery passion wanton
Misty fogs prevail
Steep the tea of doves
Hunting for an assail

This is for you Tommy boy in all it's rawness. I wanted to consult Merriam-webster but chose to just put it out there.

I so love your poetry. Truly rare indeed!

I hope you enjoy. Been a while with writing, for me.

Tul

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tulip2633's photo
Sat 08/22/15 10:12 PM
Tommy boy. You write so much for others. I wanted to write something for you!

Be well!

Tul
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tulip2633's photo
Sat 08/22/15 10:42 PM
I made an edit because I used the same word twice. Don't like to do that.

tulip2633's photo
Sat 08/22/15 11:43 PM
Bye Tommy boy. I have to take a break from visiting the forum. Be well.

Hope my poem last you forever!

tommyboy1101's photo
Mon 08/24/15 10:42 AM
Tul,

That was a very moving compilation. I fell deep into it, wallowing, basking.

Thank ye for sharing, Tul,

tommy boy moran / Ireland

tulip2633's photo
Mon 08/24/15 04:08 PM
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tommyboy1101's photo
Tue 08/25/15 10:47 AM
:heart: smokin :thumbsup: