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tulip2633
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Sat 08/22/15 10:36 PM
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For my Tommy boy
Moors on the path abandon Wet dew upon it abides Humming a mossy punctuate Rhythmic sea subsides Hear ye yonder glen Triumphant poppies sound Crackle the feral cat Glistening wings abound Fiery passion wanton Misty fogs prevail Steep the tea of doves Hunting for an assail This is for you Tommy boy in all it's rawness. I wanted to consult Merriam-webster but chose to just put it out there. I so love your poetry. Truly rare indeed! I hope you enjoy. Been a while with writing, for me. Tul |
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Tommy boy. You write so much for others. I wanted to write something for you!
Be well! Tul |
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I made an edit because I used the same word twice. Don't like to do that.
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Bye Tommy boy. I have to take a break from visiting the forum. Be well.
Hope my poem last you forever! |
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Tul,
That was a very moving compilation. I fell deep into it, wallowing, basking. Thank ye for sharing, Tul, tommy boy moran / Ireland |
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