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Topic: We are real
NorCalSwe Joined Sun 03/09/14 Posts: 2438	Fri 08/21/15 01:54 PM
So we are here Where things are real While out there is sand and wind Nothing solid, nothing stationary Yet here together we have foundation Stay with me and build this fortess This sanctuary, this garden Stay where infinity is captured in every finite moment Stay here where we are real where we are one Out there time may end Out there the moments pass Out there is not real It is fading into a dream Yet where we are In this moment In this infintesimal moment You and I are real

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 08/21/15 03:17 PM
Lovely, Professor.....

lu_rosemary Joined Wed 09/11/13 Posts: 9123	Fri 08/21/15 03:41 PM
Try to read this upside down ..it will end with ..."so we are here" Nice one, thank you.

Ladywind7 Joined Sun 04/08/12 Posts: 7833	Fri 08/21/15 04:22 PM
You are right. Reverse it is just as good.

Pansytilly Joined Mon 06/09/14 Posts: 11310	Fri 08/21/15 04:49 PM
I rather like it in reverse

NorCalSwe Joined Sun 03/09/14 Posts: 2438	Fri 08/21/15 11:03 PM
Thank you all. Oh you're right it is good in reverse. Um.....yeah...I planned it that way

stefiepek Joined Wed 08/05/15 Posts: 720	Fri 08/21/15 11:08 PM
Nice

NorCalSwe Joined Sun 03/09/14 Posts: 2438	Fri 08/21/15 11:22 PM
Thanks Stefie

soulartisan Joined Sat 08/15/15 Posts: 41	Sat 08/22/15 12:41 AM
Thank you for sharing. :)

tulip2633 Joined Tue 07/07/15 Posts: 2415	Sat 08/22/15 01:56 PM
He was just using that reverse psychology on us. That was awesome! Oh, how I want the sands to stop shifting under my feet before I get swallowed up into an abyss that I am unable to return from.

SitkaRains Joined Thu 10/09/08 Posts: 17228	Sat 08/22/15 02:03 PM
Very nice, thought provoking indeed Thank you for sharing

NorCalSwe Joined Sun 03/09/14 Posts: 2438	Sat 08/22/15 10:14 PM
Thank you all!! and to Tulip

tulip2633 Joined Tue 07/07/15 Posts: 2415	Sat 08/22/15 10:20 PM
Thank you all!! and to Tulip You're awesome. You seem to have dealt with some real pain and are grander for it. Nice presence! Btw...I have a shovel, some dry ice and a bit of Glad zip lock bags. Lets do some damage.

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