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Thou Hast Cast a Relevant Shadow Thou hast cast your relevant shadow across the soft and gentle rain, In the sum of the body of our circumstance, we're here together again, Sit with me under a tree when the moon illuminates a black, dark night, And let's hide away embracing one another 'til morning's bright new light, Never a moon so bold nor a pasture so green, in a world so beautifully serene, And in this gentle scene we covet tiny rainbows like love's soft song in a dream, Tranquil are we - the world, yielding to noone more meaningful, more pure than we, For our sanctuary remains in the garden of our language of the earth and the sea. Thom Douglas Carlisle ( Irish Tommy Moran ) - Ireland === === |
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i really like this...
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Beautiful.
- It reminds me of The Poet...(Referencing Moonglow) |
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Pansytilly,
Thank ye. Glad it struck something with you. I am pleased. tommo / Ireland |
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chronicliar75,
Ah yes, 'Referencing Moonglow ' I do recall this recent piece. Thank ye for your reminder. Your so kind. tommo / Ireland |
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Pansytilly, Thank ye. Glad it struck something with you. I am pleased. tommo / Ireland I have liked many of your pieces...i was just quiet about most. |
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Your words always touch my emotions. This one brings tears for its beauty.
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Pansytilly,
I see. When I view your entries I notice they're always in the hundreds of hits. This because you're so popular as a writer. I just accept this reality and move along knowing your doing well. Your not hurting for fans, that's for sure. Thanks for your valid time, Pansytilly, tommo / Ireland |
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i am humbled by your honor...
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Quintessentially,
Your so very kind to me. Thank you, my friend. Thank you and stay well there in Bunbury. tommy boy / Ireland |
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Pansytilly,
You have my full vote and support. tommy boy / Ireland |
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Edited by
Dreadaye
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Thu 07/30/15 06:50 AM
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"For our sanctuary remains in the garden of our language of the earth and the sea. "
As ever Tommyboy, your pen remains true to service; curating fathomless depths of meaning in every image that you lovingly restore. As a Poet you break bread with us, that we might sup upon the lettering you thoughtfully dispense. Thank you, Child of Nethun, this corner of www is a truly Illumined place for your presence. Regards Always Aye'm Dread |
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Dread, my warm friend,
Yours is a special place. A cave of your own. One cries out for you at it's opening wondering if he, or she would be welcome inside. This is the story of Dreadeye. And, ye welcome everyone in without direct concern for your own safety. For you are a bard, a poet in real. Thank ye kind Sir. tommy boy / Ireland |
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Fri 07/31/15 10:40 AM
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From the Author's Desk:
Yes, I like this one. A bit baser in it's poetic rhyme makeup, but still, unique in it's own right. It does display rhythm to some degree. A bit choppy but worth the glance. And so, thank you all for taking your important time out to peruse this. I am appreciative, and, as for all of you with glasses in hand under a low lit nightlite, let me just say that ye bless me with your kindness. Your reading my works makes me smile inside. Be well, all of ye, Thom Carlisle ( Irish Tommy Moran ) - Ireland. |
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A quietly held touch.
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Sounds like a nice place to be.
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Sharris, tulip2633 . . .
tulip2633, yes, a nice place to be. Sharris, a quiet held touch, yes I agree. Thank ye both so very much, tommo / Ireland |
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This was a beautiful read. Thank you for making my night.
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This was a beautiful read. Thank you for making my night.
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singlequeen24,
It's nice isn't it, making someone's night? I thank ye for your visit and your time, singlequeen24. It's always nice to hear (read,) someone who seems to have enjoyed my written laments. I feel like a new puppy smiling up at ye - in your arms. Thanks so much, singlequeen24, tommy boy moran / Ireland |
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