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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Wed 06/17/15 06:34 PM
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YOU
My thoughts ponders the existence of you My eyes work to visualize you My mind collects all knowledge of you My feet start to walk towards you My lips speak in admiration of you My intellect is ignited by you My ear hopes to hear you My arms stretched out to embrace you My hands want to caress you My body hopes to be held by you My mouth imagines the taste of you My heart seeks a connected to you My life feels amiss in absence of you. My dreams shows the possibilities with you My judgement drives the case for you My future dares to include you Claudia Thomas Barber (2015) |
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You are enamored...
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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Thu 06/18/15 04:56 PM
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You are enamored...
LOL... more impressed and very interested. I feel real deeply, and just felt inspired to write this one. One day I may give it to the man who captures my heart. There are many fine, wonderful men out there, but it does not mean they are necessarily the right one. 'Love' is a funny, completex and mind blowing thing. I am romantic but realistic too. Have a great day hon.
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Beautiful...!
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Poetry :)
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Thanks for the kind word you lovely people. means heaps. love and peace all the way.
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Touching and soulful.
I dig it. |
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That's great Zen. Thank you,
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Fri 06/26/15 04:12 AM
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JaUkNz,
This was indeed a powerful poem with moments of purity, truth and the desire to show aspects of deeper inner meaning. I noticed a few light typo errors although easily overlooked. I'd say, JaUkNz, in this piece you're really trying to connect others with how it is you feel inside. I think if this is so you've done a marvellous job in promoting 'self'. All in all, a job well done, JaUkNz. 
Be well, Thom Douglas Carlisle ( Irish Tommy Moran ) - Ireland |
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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Sat 06/27/15 07:27 AM
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JaUkNz, This was indeed a powerful poem with moments of purity, truth and the desire to show aspects of deeper inner meaning. I noticed a few light typo errors although easily overlooked. I'd say, JaUkNz, in this piece you're really trying to connect others with how it is you feel inside. I think if this is so you've done a marvellous job in promoting 'self'. All in all, a job well done, JaUkNz.
Be well, Thom Douglas Carlisle ( Irish Tommy Moran ) - Ireland Hi tommyboy. Yep. your quite right about the typos LOL... You say " I think if this is so you've done a marvellous job in promoting 'self'. " OK. not sure how you mean. So is anyone who write about how they feel promoting self?? or do you mean my personal aim is to promote myself? I thought this forum was for people who wanted to share their poems or stories with others. What are you doing when you post one of yours? Would you say you were promoting self? or sharing a feeling, experience, journey, insight... I would be interested to know, 
Thanks for your opinion, Be well |
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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Sat 06/27/15 07:17 AM
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JaUkNz,
Of course by asking if you're promoting 'self' I mean this in a positive way. Yes, and as for me, I am always trying to promote 'self'. This is truly why each of us are here. Continue to promote 'self', JaUkNz. For that's where other's will find ye in your deepest, most meaningful places. Inward. Always inward. Ok then? Hopefully ye know I'm in full support of what your doing in here. You're poetry is deep and valuable. I like it! Thank ye, and be well, tommy boy moran / Ireland |
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YOU My thoughts ponders the existence of you My eyes work to visualize you My mind collects all knowledge of you My feet start to walk towards you My lips speak in admiration of you My intellect is ignited by you My ear hopes to hear you My arms stretched out to embrace you My hands want to caress you My body hopes to be held by you My mouth imagines the taste of you My heart seeks a connected to you My life feels amiss in absence of you. My dreams shows the possibilities with you My judgement drives the case for you My future dares to include you Claudia Thomas Barber (2015) Original, sexy love speak... I dig it too! 
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Edited by
JaUkNz
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Sat 06/27/15 06:17 PM
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JaUkNz, Of course by asking if you're promoting 'self' I mean this in a positive way. Yes, and as for me, I am always trying to promote 'self'. This is truly why each of us are here. Continue to promote 'self', JaUkNz. For that's where other's will find ye in your deepest, most meaningful places. Inward. Always inward. Ok then? Hopefully ye know I'm in full support of what your doing in here. You're poetry is deep and valuable. I like it! Thank ye, and be well, tommy boy moran / Ireland I see what you mean Tommy. Thank you. I respect and value your insight. thanks hun and thanks Leigh2154 |
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