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As a published writer, I am highly selective in the written work which I find remarkable.
Someone here offhandedly posted the following piece in another thread, probably just cranking it out in the spur of the moment. I found it so pretty and visually and emotionally evocative, I saved it. Can anyone guess the author? And what are your thoughts on it? Ohh early morning is the best The sun is just raising his head to kiss you gently Morning dew dripping from blades of grass Oak trees reaching up to embrace the morning sun Petals of the passion flowers slowly opening So the bumblebee can gently kiss her petals and drink her nectar Sleepy wildlife spooning one last time before the morning sun Cast of the evening shivers Mmmm... nothing better than a little morning sunshine |
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Edited by
tommyboy1101
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Fri 05/29/15 12:30 PM
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Nicely constructed and with a good solid flow - don't ye think? I couldn't in the world figure out it's author is though. And yet, somehow I think of you, IamwhoIam1. Could that author be you??
Be well, Princess, and, thank ye for sharing, tommy boy moran / Ireland |
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Actually Iam that is nice
It has a gentle hint of erotica without getting anywhere near vulgar, well controlled I mean, so I think it maybe No1 |
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As a published writer, I am highly selective in the written work which I find remarkable. Someone here offhandedly posted the following piece in another thread, probably just cranking it out in the spur of the moment. I found it so pretty and visually and emotionally evocative, I saved it. Can anyone guess the author? And what are your thoughts on it? Ohh early morning is the best The sun is just raising his head to kiss you gently Morning dew dripping from blades of grass Oak trees reaching up to embrace the morning sun Petals of the passion flowers slowly opening So the bumblebee can gently kiss her petals and drink her nectar Sleepy wildlife spooning one last time before the morning sun Cast of the evening shivers Mmmm... nothing better than a little morning sunshine Iam !!  ...Easy peasy, the author is our very own Dr. D! ...I agree, it has imagery, emotion and sex appeal...I can understand why you would save it Iam... .
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because the word 'nectar' is there, I think phd
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because the word 'nectar' is there, I think phd
 ...Dead give-a-way....
Morning (((((Deb)))))... 
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because the word 'nectar' is there, I think phd
...Dead give-a-way....
Morning (((((Deb)))))...
hi (((leigh)))
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does self publishing count?
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I have not self-published, unless you're referring to yourself.
Thanks for your input, everyone. :-) |
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I am editing the next to the last line. It didn't make sense. Now, it does. :-)
Ohh early morning is the best The sun is just raising his head to kiss you gently Morning dew dripping from blades of grass Oak trees reaching up to embrace the morning sun Petals of the passion flowers slowly opening So the bumblebee can gently kiss her petals and drink her nectar Sleepy wildlife spooning one last time before the morning sun Casts off the evening shivers Mmmm... nothing better than a little morning sunshine |
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