Topic: MY NAME IS PAIN | |
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My name is Pain
I am that feeling called pain. I'm That feeling in your guts that you can't explain. That hurt that's unbearable to hide. I'm the reason for your heart aches. That person that smiles trying to hide what's inside. I'm not visible but I'm very real nothing about me is fake. im your Deep dark secrets that go on for miles. Trying to ignore the hurt you become in denial. I bring no happiness I fill your world with dark gray sky's. Im also part of many lies.With not a feeling of remorse. I make it rain on your parade. when I'm around always expect the worst. Not a chance of hope I bring emptiness to your world I'm that hurt. That cut to the wrist that cant seem to sooth what's within. I enter your life with out an invitation.Ill make you fall into depression . Im That feeling that can cause you to go insane. Im very well known I'm the hurt you can't explain My name is Pain. |
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I liked it.
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'Amazing' |
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Pain is so subjective, yet medical doctors always ask you to rate it on a scale of 1-10. I have no concept of that scale.
All pain is indescribable to me, I feel your pain. |
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You must love pain not hate.
Then u getting used to it. |
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Let me gather my thoughts, like strewn fragments of old friends and indispensable memories. I've filed them away in the depths of my soul and let the wind scatter them about. My loves lay in the clutter with my heart asunder. It all whirls in the depths of an unceasing invisible tempest.
What is left of my past is tethered to what has become of me, and together we tread cautiously on the slippery stones down the stream of life. |
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Well Done Sir .. Succinct and to The Point.
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^^^
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What an incredible premise!!! (Pain as a name)
SO well done!!! |
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Very Well done
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