So how bad is it?

looks better now that you've added to it. the no answer on marital status might make people think twice. at least speaking for myself (if I were still searching) I wouldn't want to be involved with a taken man.
but the rest gives several good points to start a conversation.

hope you find what you're looking for

I think there is a great start... I like how you talk about raising your daughter.. I do believe that you should add a bit more about your interests and maybe a little about what you are looking for...
Good luck out here.

Thank you

it's a good start but can I ask you..are you looking for an intimate encounter or a friend and see where it goes from there or a serious relationship.You don't have to answer me but...if you lead with a shirtless picture as your main image most women will assume you are looking for a hook-up and if you are then that is of course your business.
If you aren't looking for that then lead with some of the things you like to do and the fact that you are a good dad. be upbeat and positive and dont make it sound like you are worn out and have no time for someone in your life

Okay I'll work on that

Better pic.. for lead in.. TMommy is right when I was single if my BF would have still had his shirtless pic I would have passed him by since I was looking for more

Good to know