Is love enough
when the weight of it
forces you to your knees?

Heaven hears my prayers,
but answers with a quiet stillness,
that shivers down my spine






Not finished

Ladywind,

Very powerful construct. When finished this piece will be well worth reading. The weight of love forcing one to one's knees? Can't get any more powerful than that Dear.

I cannot wait. Please find full completion and post this. I wish to lavish in your valid wordplay.

By the necessary by, I visited your Mingle2 page and tried to affix a message, but I guess I didn't meet with your requirements there. I felt kind of bad at first but then understood.

Be well,

tommo / Ireland

PS: You're good. Very good.

(((Ladywind)))

Well hurry up and finish!!!! You have me waiting and you know that's the hardest part of life

Please send everyone an angel
And trust them with its care

Someone or something for them to love
And to always be there.


Please send everyone an angel
One to help them fill their days

With hope, love and laughter
And the warmth of sunshine rays.


Please send everyone an angel
To share their evenings under twinkling stars

Keep them warm during cold nights
And to feel very peaceful with delight.


Please send everyone an angel
The very best one you can find.

Please send everyone an angel
A true friend's hard to find.


[Marita Manalo Domingo]