Topic: DEAD PRIESTS
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Sat 01/31/15 12:09 AM


DEAD PRIESTS
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I eat dead priests


But only after ..

I have swished them around

And twirled them down

Into the ground


A good place to contemplate

The injury that they caused

In the name of God

Those crippled mercenary ****ers


Alkali becomes Sod.


Vitsec

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Sat 01/31/15 01:01 AM
I don't know anything about poetry, so I may be missing the point altogether. And the religion part doesn't bother me, because I'm not a overly religious person.

But I find this a bit sick

Just my opinion

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Sat 01/31/15 03:58 AM
The thing about poetry is that it is all about your own perception ( or lack there of ) .. my motivation in writing this is simply a reflection of what I understand about so called " humanity " . Religion is a bad word .. Spirituality is another story altogether.

:-) )-:

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Sat 01/31/15 05:19 AM
Hmmm.. I guess I'm not on that level. I read it as you like to eat dead people.. chew them up and spit them out. That's what I read.

My perception on that is.. sick

But hey, I'm not a artist.. just a normal guy.. If that is art then by all means..chew away

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Sat 01/31/15 08:35 AM
The dead priests referenced in the poem are a bit of a metaphor for lost souls. The flesh itself would mean nothing .. and NO .. I am not a cannibal. I am not an artist .. and there is no such thing as " normal " despite what you might need to believe. You are just you and I am just me.

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Sat 01/31/15 08:46 AM

The dead priests referenced in the poem are a bit of a metaphor for lost souls. The flesh itself would mean nothing .. and NO .. I am not a cannibal. I am not an artist .. and there is no such thing as " normal " despite what you might need to believe. You are just you and I am just me.


waving Hey V....Never complain, never explain:wink: ....Write it like you feel it...drinker