LUCID IN THE SKY WITH DIAMONDS

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Your lucid last look

At your motionless dream

Your choice .. your points

Not what they would seem


You drift within

Your secret mire

Not seeking the soul

Of yourself .. or the means to inspire


Others to move

Towards a worthwhile life

That might somehow provide

Some sort of salvation .. an end


To .. whatever kind of strife


And all that it took

To corrupt yours and their mind

Which then lost all perspective

With no time left to find


Their way out .. or your way in

The way in which

You could all have lived


Less .. The Sin.



Vitsec.

So beautiful, Vitsec.
Thank you!

Thanks to you All for your kind remarks !!!

It feels really good to get some positive ( or any kind of ) feedback for what one writes and I am sure you all appreciate what I am saying.

What I find sort of interesting is that I began posting my poems on Face the Book about a month ago .. and of the 20 or so poems I have placed there so far .. I have gotten NO comments .. just a couple of "likes" .. and these are people that know me reasonably well .. go figure ?

Thanks again Folks, Vitsec. :-) :-) :-)