Topic: “Kiss This”
TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:06 PM
“Kiss This”


You tell me to trust.
It is a must.
As we begin to chat.
I laid my life out flat.
Told all there was to tell.
I thought you would as well.
It was to my surprise.
Instead I received lies.
This I did not expect.
Nor did I think you were perfect.
All I know.
Is I tried to show.
The way I felt.
My heart you had started to melt.
I thought I was strong.
But then everything went wrong.
In my face you slammed the door.
My heart fell to the floor.
I do not understand.
The things we had planned.
Were those just things you said?
Just to make me think ahead.
Just to make me think.
That everything was in sync.
Now it makes me wonder why.
I give my heart and even try.
To you I have something to say.
As turn and walk away.
I hope you remember this.
As I turn my back to you this you can kiss.


K.L.M
10/1/2007




Okay first of all no this has nothing to do with me at all
it was based on a conversation with a friend. Besides mine
get a tad bit more harsh lmao bigsmile

shutterguy's photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:08 PM
ouch!!!!!

nice poem though sherlock

no photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:08 PM
WOOOOOOOO!!! Powerful Gurly!!

no photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:09 PM
:cry: and laughall in one

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:15 PM
Awwww the thoughts a conversation will give us at times its sad but happens to us all. The only thing we can do is pick up the pieces and mend our hearts and move on. Sometimes a few choice words makes us feel better lmaolaugh laugh laugh laugh

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Mon 10/01/07 02:17 PM
I loved it... I loved it... I LOVED IT!!!
I just experienced it.. so I am feeling this one

drinker

bgeorge's photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:18 PM
very nice, i can see the mad bootystomp as they walk away...b

geo54's photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:27 PM
flowerforyou

frankfk's photo
Mon 10/01/07 02:40 PM
KISS THIS, A NICE CAPTIONlaugh flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Mon 10/01/07 03:02 PM
cute girl I think a few of us may have thought that a time or twoflowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 10/02/07 11:43 PM
LOL thank you all for reading this one bigsmile flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 10/03/07 05:10 AM
MORE !!!!! Sweet as a nut as they say here in old Blighty flowerforyou

Puffins1958's photo
Wed 10/03/07 05:13 AM
Very nice...I LOVE it

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TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/04/07 11:52 PM
thank you both actualy wrote it for a friend bigsmile laugh