“Feeling Within”


Just to feel your soft touch.
How I need you so much.
As you fingers play upon my skin.
As if you were playing the strings of a violin.
Just to hear the music within.
Soon it starts to begin.
At first it may be with a low moan.
Before long it takes on another tone.
The one that makes you smile.
To know it is all worthwhile.
Just to bring another to that point.
For them you will not disappoint.
You will bring them to a new height.
The flames within will ignite.
Then the fire will be burning full force.
It will follow its course.
Soon two bodies begin to entwine.
The rush within is so divine.
Skin upon skin soon starts to sweat.
All thoughts from there mind they forget.
Now only in this very moment do they think.
With each touch that brings them to that brink.
Each time they touch they feel the electric shocks.
Go through there bodies as if they have entered Pandora’s Box.
No longer in this world are they.
They are together in this sexually place far away.
No longer do they care.
Or even do they dare.
For the things they feel.
It is so real.
Even though it feels like a fantasy.
Soon it will bring them both to ecstasy.
He lays his fingers upon her skin.
As they remember the feeling within.



K.L.M
9/30/2007

Oh my..steamy....whew I need ice...whoa Gurly whoa

Lmao well hell figure I better get off the crying ones lmao what a better way but to think about something in the past. lmao at least before I forget it altogether lmao. Ohhh sweet memories they are lol.

Kristi...

You know how I can tell good writing when I read it

I can FEEL the words...wonderfully written, you can feel it!!!

wow very hot what passion i couldnt imagine a woman touching me with that fire

great peom sherlock

Puffins thank you so much for your kind words glad you enjoyed it


Shutterguy someday I do hope that you are able to feel that fire within Making Love to the point you lose all sense of time and reality it is a blesses feeling indeed.



Even tho with the one that made me feel that way is no more I will never regret the relationship for the things he made me feel. I may never find another that makes me feel that way but there is always hope.

Oh girl hear you go again,really liked it,but would like to feel that again even more, keep them coming

Humm so would I pkh so would I lol Been way too long

very beautiful,and affectionate words there tx.

It sure is hot in here.TxsGal, you're naughty....................

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa it is hot in here

evad28 thank you you are so kind


BonnyMiss lmao if only you really knew girl lmao


Denise girlfriend it just you he has you all steamed up