Topic: “Hell Within”
TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 09/30/07 02:51 PM
“Hell Within”


Do we really know?
What others have gone through?
The things they have lived with.
For some it seems like a myth.
But for them it was the real deal.
Life for all has not always been ideal.
Some had that loving home.
Where others dreamed they could just roam.
And get away from the hell they were in.
But instead they keep things within.
They keep it deep inside afraid to tell anyone.
Just waiting for the day they could run.
And get away from it all.
In the mean time around there heart they build a wall.
That no matter who comes around.
They will not let it be torn down.
The hurt they have inside.
Is very real and can not be denied.
But one day they will learn.
That there are some that are really concern.
About there life and the person they are today
They are not there to betray.
If it so be that it is only to be a friend.
Then that is the way it will be till the end..


K.L.M
9/30/2007

shutterguy's photo
Sun 09/30/07 02:54 PM
i truly relate to this and thanks again your such a great writing talent

ChelleBelle's photo
Sun 09/30/07 02:55 PM
flowerforyou

pkh's photo
Sun 09/30/07 02:55 PM
beautiful as always,have a lot going on but hope you know I careflowerforyou

John1992's photo
Sun 09/30/07 03:01 PM
All I can say is wow and quite true.

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 09/30/07 03:14 PM
Thank you all for reading and for understanding that for some life has not always been a bed of Roses. This was not based off of my life even though it was not a bed of Roses there are some that has had it much worse than I care to think about at times. Or matter of fact any of us think about. It is up to each of us to make sure the things that happen to us as kids never happen to our own kids. Only we can change the pattern in history so it is not repeated over again.flowerforyou :cry: flowerforyou bigsmile flowerforyou

shutterguy's photo
Sun 09/30/07 03:34 PM
thats why ive never raised a hand to my kids kristi we sit down and talk

shutterguy's photo
Sun 09/30/07 03:37 PM
i do know that hell and i hope your great writing well help others or make them think before they raise a hand

TxsGal3333's photo
Sun 09/30/07 07:41 PM
Or maybe make them think and realize that we must change and make sure within our own kids the past does not repeat itself for we have the power to make sure our kids do not endure the same things that we did in our own childhood.flowerforyou bigsmile flowerforyou