What if I had done it a different way
What if you had never had your say.
Not taking no for a answer instead of oh let's see
Making it happen heart beating fast excitedly.


This is our life a learning journey we take
Some great things we do some big mistakes.
At the end of the day fate is always there
Life can be so wonderful yet also unfair.


Many different cultures getting on with their life
Thousands of different places beautiful in sight.
What if we never existed how sad that would be
So count each and every blessing with everything we all see.

Thank you

Excellent write.....

Aww thank you Up2Us so glad I liked it

Nice!!

Thank you Amelinng glad u liked it

angel, I love this rhythm and the effort made in connecting rhyme with feeling. You are indeed a good solid poet, angel68111.

We do dutifully recall that poetry should somewhere within it's normal, gentle construct hold true and real meaning. As for your work - ye show all.

I get it, my Angel. I get it.

tommo / Ireland

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What if I had done it a different way
What if you had never had your say.
Not taking no for a answer instead of oh let's see
Making it happen heart beating fast excitedly.


This is our life a learning journey we take
Some great things we do some big mistakes.
At the end of the day fate is always there
Life can be so wonderful yet also unfair.


Many different cultures getting on with their life
Thousands of different places beautiful in sight.
What if we never existed how sad that would be
So count each and every blessing with everything we all see.

angel68111

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Yes...loved it!

Some of the words touches the soul....sort of like reading my mind, echoing and voicing my thoughts! Great write!

Thank you Tommy yes I try to create what we are thinking and too visualise it.