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Anybody got any comments on how my profile looks?
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I think its good..honest and sincere. but the message is a little long.
Lets face it, it has to be like a 4-1 ratio, women have much more choices then men. Less time to read long messages. may loose interest faster. Also.. I would drop the Pollen thing.. tell them what's in your medicine cabinet down the road. just my take.. hope it helps |
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Yep, it's a little long. Leave out the negative and the wordy parts.
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Yeah, your profile is a bit long. I'd also include some full body shots. FYI.
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