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Edited by
lovesusie49
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Tue 10/14/14 06:34 AM
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The rain begins to fall, Like the Flowers in the Spring,
The Birds are no longer Singing ,The sign of wintering, All the leafs are falling, Colors all so brightly, just a small peep of fall just very slightly, I see the squirrel's storing of their winter's gathering, jumping from branch to Branch, as if nothing else is Really mattering . By Susan Smith I am the Poet |
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Suz,
I am impressed with your word structure in this piece. Well done, Babe. Nice. Tell this poet, isn't it just mighty fine reading flowing word structure? Seems like poems should always have good, valid word construction. So often this fails us, Suz. In you I see grand enterprise. I see maturity and the rare flowering of word play into full bloom. I see great and grand - raw enterprise. Ye please me Babe. I see you, Suz. And I am pleased. tommo / Ireland |
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