Everyone please comment on my poems Ive submitted please....Id like to know what everyone thinks





I once saw a child with big blue eyes,
I once saw a child with black and blue eyes
I once saw a child playing with barbie dolls,
I once saw a child staring at the walls
I once saw a child who liked to read books page by page,
I once saw a child much too old for her age
I once saw a child much too old for her age, I once saw a child who's face would confirm your worst fears
I once saw a child who just wanted to play all day long,
I once saw a child who heard sirens all day long
I once saw a child with many hopes, dreams, and goals,
I once saw a child whos dreams were shattered long ago
I once saw a child that everybody knows,
I now see a child everybody thinks they know

I really like this...a lot of people think they know a child and the child grows up with ideas of hurt pain and anger....
people who deal with children should be given the first thought in giving first aid....
DO NO HARM...
keep writing..

Yea it took me 4 weeks to write this...

I'm thinking it took you hour or so to hunt it down on the web

I thought it was very well written our children are the future but so many suffer every day and endure pain for many different reasons. I hope that child was not you.