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Topic: Candle of the Night
Vitsec Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 283	Sat 08/09/14 04:31 AM Edited by Vitsec on Sat 08/09/14 04:33 AM
Candle of The Night An unlit candle Clarifies the Night Seasons of Lonlieness Day .. Dream .. Delight Season of The Witch A New Time .. to lie The Past becomes The Present A New Time .. To Die Who will hear the Whimper With One Last Breath to Go One Ray of Sunshine Acres of Snow Shadows Cast unto Nothingness Fond Liason of Themselves Blood Pours Down the Sewers Tears .. All Stacked on Shelves Vitsec

tazzops Joined Sat 12/20/08 Posts: 33333	Sat 08/09/14 04:59 PM


m4247 Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 29	Sun 08/10/14 04:19 PM
To me it sounds kinda scary, a little creepy, but catchy... I like it

Vitsec Joined Tue 01/07/14 Posts: 283	Tue 08/12/14 04:27 AM
Thanks for the comment .. it is written to convey the downward spiral that The Societies of this planet are on .. a come uppance is soon to come.

galaxyhitchhiker Joined Mon 07/28/14 Posts: 28	Tue 08/12/14 07:50 AM
Did you intentionally capitalize some words in each line? Does capitalizing those words imply something? Reading it brought me shivers, that means it's beautiful.

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