Here's another by my daughter:

A pretty young girl,
on the outside she smiles.
But inside, her life is wicked and vile.
She forgot what it's like to truly be glad,
and this person who seemed happy was always sad.
She was torn up with things she did not understand,
these feeling she could not comprehend.
She had on confidence, she hated herself.
She hated life and almost everyone else.
She had a life all of her own,
Her personal shell made her secluded and alone.
Don't be like this girl, or you will die unhappy and alone.

Nerves

I love it
It makes alot of sense!