Topic: state of mind
fxx35's photo
Mon 07/07/14 03:42 PM
loneliness fills me
brings me to the brink

when I learn to use it
gave me time to think

loneliness refines me
changing my hopes, and dreams

unchecked it defines me
drives me to extremes

loneliness makes me
stand and face the pain

loneliness makes me
think that i'm insane

loneliness surrounds me
filling up my day

loneliness stays with me
it never goes away

loneliness will never
leave me alone

mig25's photo
Mon 07/07/14 05:04 PM

loneliness fills me
brings me to the brink

when I learn to use it
gave me time to think

loneliness refines me
changing my hopes, and dreams

unchecked it defines me
drives me to extremes

loneliness makes me
stand and face the pain

loneliness makes me
think that i'm insane

loneliness surrounds me
filling up my day

loneliness stays with me
it never goes away

loneliness will never
leave me alone


I like this . . . welcome to the wonderful land of poetry

Reconsider's photo
Tue 07/08/14 01:24 AM
That is what loneliness give us in the illusion of emptiness we are filled with ourselves.

Amoscarine's photo
Tue 07/08/14 10:01 AM

That is what loneliness give us in the illusion of emptiness we are filled with ourselves.

Nice point!